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-==== More than a Window Manager ====
+==== Much more than a Window Manager ====
 
-Long ago Enlightenment was just a project to make a Window Manager for
+Long ago, Enlightenment began as a project to make a Window Manager for
 X11. It has grown a lot since then to well over 1 million lines of C
 code in just the EFL libraries alone, as well as a Window Manager, and a
 set of applications. There is a vibrant and active community of